i think the rough style actually suits the scene a great deal, it sort of makes me think of what we hold in our memories. rarely do we recall the details except the important stuff like our feelings and the people we're with, the brand of suds you use in the tub? not so much
Mmm, sensual but not overly erotic. Tateful, even! The perspective blows my mind by how well it's done. And the color palette is lovely. I actually like the 'messy' lines... and I don't find the coloring messy at all. Really, this is fantastic.